LawlessMisery's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nature sounds]

I'm not sure why...

... What was your intent? Was it a test piece? Is there something specific you were trying to do with it? I guess the graphics were okay, for what they were, as well as the sound. But not much of a movie, sorry.

TromboneClock responds:

The intent was a test of some sorts. Good to hear it did what it was supposed to do.

[Casper & Spooky 1]

Humorous...

...in that: "Ooookay...?" kind of way. I don't mind short, but that was too short. Seemed almost pointless. I like the graphics and the idea. The sound was good, but if you could add something a bit more to it, that would be absolutely fabulous. Nice idea for a short, as long as you're not sued by the creators of Casper.

boinky33 responds:

I'm sure they're dead, but if I have anyone to be scared of for a lawsuit, it's probably the Harvey company.

[NUTS. Ep.1 - Microphones]

Subtitles...

... that's what I suggest. Subtitles and turn up the volume on your sound files a bit more. Other than that, I think the squirrel is super cute.

mankeymunkey responds:

Hey, thanks. Not too sure about sound files though... Im still a noob. I dunno how to do jack yet. Ill work on it though, thanks.

[Japanese Music Thing]

I have a question...

... please, forgive me if I'm not quite catching it. But I don't understand the point to these. All over newgrounds people are submitting flash animations like this one and I'm not quite sure I catch the idea. Is it just randomness? Which would make sense if it is.

Graphics: I've seen N00b Princess do better, so it was a bit disappointing.

Style: Like I said, I don't get it, but it still counts as a style.

Sound: Alot better than most. And I have a weak spot for the music.

Violence: I did like the concept of the house being set ablaze.

Interactivity: 1 because there was more than just a play button.

Humor: It was better than most of what I've seen this week.

Little-Rena responds:

Umm, yeah this was just suppost to be random. This is the best background I have drawn though, lol :S
Anyway, thanks for the review.

[The Boy With No Name]

Good effort...

... I only suggest that while being inspired by Fat-Pie, understand that inspiration and using the same style are two different things. I can understand the desire to animate like Fat-Pie (a master Flash Artist), but be very careful not to copy his exact style. Understand, I'm not saying you have, I'm saying to be careful. It's a fine line and the potential you have would be wasted. Good luck and thank you for sharing.

Vreal-Studios responds:

Thank you very much for your constructive review! I am being carefull. I tried to get the same "environment" as Fat Pie's style, also because I want to be better to animate. And I really did in the process of making this.
Got a lot of experience.
Thanks.

[Jeremy Fox]

Fabulous...

...Jeremy Fox may just be my cousin. We should have locked him in a box and buried him. This work is great. The graphics, sound, and ideas are very well put together (as I'm sure you know ;) ) I have no constructive words for this work. Great job. I'm glad I watched it.

PapaQ responds:

Your cousin sure shounds like a great character. Your words are more constructive than you can imagine, thanks.

[Wrath, Sloth, Gluttony]

It carries a rhythm

...quite a bit like "The Raven" and "Teltale Heart". It was a good concept and I did watch it all the way to the end. I wasn't thrilled with how much it reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe, almost like a rip off without the rip. Given that we are all inspired by the subconcious memory (or sometimes the conscious) I can't say that it would be right to say anything condemning. The rest I throughly enjoyed and a good piece of work is a good piece of work. Thank you for sharing.

RSQViper responds:

I have actually only ever heard a very small part of "The Raven" which is how I started the thing with a crow.

But, in all honesty I was mostly influenced by Dr Suess and his rhyming scheme. Telltale Heart was also something I've never read or heard, I've no idea what it is actually. :3

Thanks for the review!

[A FAT CUP]

Interesting style...

... but of course it was destroyed with the face and repulsive noise at the end. I gave you what you earned. Nothing less, nothing more. Work on concentrating on your style of animation. It's worth expansion.

Crusty-Wiwuh responds:

I really need to stop using Piclownjew in my movies...

[WHY]

Sincerely...

... it was different. But it needs substance. Your concept was fairly good, but in all honesty, the song was completely wrong for it. If this doesn't make it through, I hope you rework it and submit it again.

G-F-D responds:

i think i will, if it dosent go through..
thx for the review

[Muriel.]

Creative twist

Rather interesting twist. Assassin without a clear motive streaks through the movie killing people and suddenly at his final target Muriel, the conventional character, steps in. Nice idea, though not really a clincher to make people want to see it.

Jzoid responds:

Hmm the twist even surprised me a little!