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LawlessMisery

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Sound...

...more sound than just the gunshot. Background music, maybe the rabbit making a comment... something. Otherwise, great job. Oh, and maybe fix the scope so it's a bit more round. It looks lopsided and odd.

Bookinator responds:

yea i noticed that lol stupid scope but thanks lol

I'm not sure why...

... What was your intent? Was it a test piece? Is there something specific you were trying to do with it? I guess the graphics were okay, for what they were, as well as the sound. But not much of a movie, sorry.

TromboneClock responds:

The intent was a test of some sorts. Good to hear it did what it was supposed to do.

Humorous...

...in that: "Ooookay...?" kind of way. I don't mind short, but that was too short. Seemed almost pointless. I like the graphics and the idea. The sound was good, but if you could add something a bit more to it, that would be absolutely fabulous. Nice idea for a short, as long as you're not sued by the creators of Casper.

boinky33 responds:

I'm sure they're dead, but if I have anyone to be scared of for a lawsuit, it's probably the Harvey company.

Nice job...

... the 'hot air' was a bit overdone in the end, I think. But other than that, I'm passing it. Nice message, clever way of sending it. The graphics were very Picaso and the style was original.

Well, it made me laugh...

... one of those short unexpected laughs. I liked it. I'll pass it. Work on the graphics a bit, though. This was amusing and random.

Subtitles...

... that's what I suggest. Subtitles and turn up the volume on your sound files a bit more. Other than that, I think the squirrel is super cute.

mankeymunkey responds:

Hey, thanks. Not too sure about sound files though... Im still a noob. I dunno how to do jack yet. Ill work on it though, thanks.

Fantastic!

This was absolutely perfect... except for the voices could have been a tiny, itsy bit better, but I'm not complaining. I want to see you do more. This was a fabulous job. I'm hooked and I want my fix ;)

Poor things...

...sucked dry. You've done a great job with this, even if it was just one day. The only thing that was a little rough was the sound quality after hitting the lungs. It gets a bit distorted there. Other than that, faaaaab-u-lus.

Well...

I think that poor baby may need more than a bandaid. I rate it 4/5 with an overall of 9

Great job...

... but I think the sound needs worked on a bit. Especially during the beginning. The quality was a bit low. Other than that, I loved it.

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