Interesting style...
... but of course it was destroyed with the face and repulsive noise at the end. I gave you what you earned. Nothing less, nothing more. Work on concentrating on your style of animation. It's worth expansion.
Interesting style...
... but of course it was destroyed with the face and repulsive noise at the end. I gave you what you earned. Nothing less, nothing more. Work on concentrating on your style of animation. It's worth expansion.
I really need to stop using Piclownjew in my movies...
Interesting concept...
... and of course, your characters were quite simple. However, I was absolutely thrilled with the whole thing. It was a good job for a "first 'real' flash". I have to say you didn't do half bad. I hope to see more of this effort.
Sincerely...
... it was different. But it needs substance. Your concept was fairly good, but in all honesty, the song was completely wrong for it. If this doesn't make it through, I hope you rework it and submit it again.
i think i will, if it dosent go through..
thx for the review
Believe it or not...
... I actually really liked your Short. The lip sync was fine in the first few lines, but lost its sync afterwards. Your whole ideal was great, you should definitely rework this and resubmit if it doesn't make it through.
It was...
... wow. That's all I can say is wow. I laughed, that's certain enough. Your style was original and the characters were adorable. I loved everything but the ending. It was extremely quick and unsatisfying. But overall, fantastic!
Compellingly...
...Strange. The randomness wasn't as random as I had expected, it actually followed a sort of pattern. But I did enjoy. You did a relatively well done job. Kutos.
Creative twist
Rather interesting twist. Assassin without a clear motive streaks through the movie killing people and suddenly at his final target Muriel, the conventional character, steps in. Nice idea, though not really a clincher to make people want to see it.
Hmm the twist even surprised me a little!
Smash hit...
or not. Rather interesting choice of flash short choices. Don't get me wrong, I liked it. It was cute. Try working on the graphics a little more.
Nice
Wonderful job! Everything aligns perfectly. Your potential is outstanding. You should work on fuller length flash, keeping with the moral ending. As a beginner it was great.
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